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I am opal, as hesitancy and the denouements of time refuse to allow my shade to settle.
I am a sporatic convulsion, the sudden burst of energy that accompanies passion and refuses to exist in a regular and expected pattern.
I am a sigh, be it out of contentment or impasse, based upon my own ubsurd preferences and those of onlookers alike.
I am the creeping sloth, for who knows what my victories would include were I to be revived from this ghastly lethargy.
I am that incommodious radio advertisement: loud, infomative, and abiding with a brightly musical background.
I could be no figure but 68.7, that in baffling selection and lack of reason, I in time will have found my designated reason.
I am the ankles that carry its superior appendages, harboring thoughts of ascension and grandeur from beneath shin and calf.
I am the antique rocking chair residing in the corner, cloaked in lace and remaining vacant save the juncture of occasion.
I am a spread of marmalade, the sweet substance of which can only be savored in timely moderation.
I am the human voice, whose assonant tones could never be compared with synthetic devices.
I am the ions within our atmosphere, painting the sky at day's close for no other motive than aesthetics.
I am the sakura tree, my fuschia pedals a commercial aspect of beauty and grace while lacking the depth of concept.
Mediocrity presents apprehension in me like nothing else, and so there is no doubt that the word behind this veil of flesh and ego is "inhibition".
:iconsimplyzippy:
Composition assignment. :|

I'm no poet, give us a fuggin' break. :faint:
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:icongraveyard-keeper:
~Graveyard-Keeper Nov 6, 2007  Student General Artist
WHY?! Why the ugly big words? >.< Anyway, it's far better than anything I could write, but that's not saying a lot. =D Also, my opinion doesn't count, so ...coffee for me too! =0
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:iconsimplyzippy:
haaah, :XD: that's one of the things my comp teacher deducted points on :o my sentences are just too fucking wordy.. *cough*

COFFEE FOR EVERYONE! :heart: :glomp:
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:icongraveyard-keeper:
~Graveyard-Keeper Nov 14, 2007  Student General Artist
Wait... your teacher made the same critique I did?
...
... O_o
The inspector should show up in your school more often. :no:
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:iconmario162:
That was nice :) Great comparisons, well done.
This was incredible:

"I am a spread of marmalade, the sweet substance of which can only be savored in timely moderation.
I am the human voice, whose assonant tones could never be compared with synthetic devices.
I am the ions within our atmosphere, painting the sky at day's close for no other motive than aesthetics."
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:iconsimplyzippy:
thank you so much dear :hug: you opinion means a lot, especially since you actually know how to write poetry... and I really, really don't. :omg:

thanks for the comment :heart:
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:iconmario162:
Nah! You are being really harsh on yourself as always, that was good and your art is friggin awesome! :D :XD:
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:iconsimplyzippy:
:heart::hug:

I complain like a sonnuvabitch. :devilish: WHO WANTS COFFEE??! *twitch*
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:iconmario162:
COFFEEEEE! I would like one with loads of sugar.
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:iconsimplyzippy:
OKAY! *horay* I've got a huge Spanish paper to write. :omg: hence the ungodly amounts of caffeine going into my body at the moment.

*falls over and enters seizure*
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:iconmario162:
fuck... yeah I had a huge paper to write and I decided to do it on the last day... :XD: it 12:18 midnight and I just finished... I've been here for 6 hours :XD: :omfg: I think I'm going to faint.
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